Battered , bruised and burnt …

She slowly dragged her bruised frame. Each step taken was a reminder of the pain she was enduring. The scratches on her arms and feet, the torn shirt sleeves, each of them made her relive the torrid time she had been through.
Her burnt skin made her wince and turn away from the mirror.
Why oh lord, she cried aloud. Why did you single me out for this punishment?
Why hadn’t she let her good sense prevail!!!

How in the world could she have gone along on a trek to a dusty mountain on blazing hot summer after noon???

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34 Responses to Battered , bruised and burnt …

  1. silverine says:

    lol!!ahem jokes aside…my sympathies…a girl who exposes herself to the sun gets her skin burnt…old silverine saying :p

  2. Solitaire says:

    Hahah!I thought it was a story about domestic violence.

  3. Nishant Chandgotia says:

    Nice Nice…Got me scared the first few lines… I will putting up something similar soon

  4. Karthik says:

    Nice one..hehe 🙂

  5. Deepti says:

    @Siverine: Yeah yeah point taken … i look like charred bean 😀

  6. Deepti says:

    @Solitaire: OMG did it sound that bad? It was just self inflicted trauma 😀@Nishanth: that was the whole idea 🙂@Karthik: thanks

  7. Anonymous says:

    Hey!! Padosi.. Kya likha hai.. Wah wah!!. I think u shud also post the briused, burnt photo of that poor lady Deepti. That will add salt to this blog 🙂LOL…

  8. Mayz says:

    lol…talk abt twist in d tale

  9. Deepti says:

    @Anon: You have seen the burnt pic right… padosi!!!@Mayz: Thanks mate!!!

  10. Alameen says:

    good good good 🙂

  11. Emmanuel says:

    <>How in the world could she have gone along on a trek to a dusty mountain on blazing hot summer after noon???<>Vattayirunnalle? or Vattanalle;)Nicely done. 🙂

  12. Deepti says:

    @Alameen: Thanks 🙂@Emmanuel: Vattonnumillya.. it was team building exercise from office 😀

  13. claytonia vices says:

    LOL! Arre it’s Puneri conventional wisdom, you never go trekking unless its monsoon or its a full moon night!! I had a few friends who after spending too many days in a/c cubicles apparently forgot how the weather is outside. It took at least a couple of weeks for them to heal their sun burns after a weekend trek in the sun!!!But yes, I too thought its about domestic violence!! LOL!

  14. Chriz says:

    fashion at its best.. my next door neihgbour girl is a fashion freak and she wears all torn clothes.. reminds me of her

  15. Deepti says:

    @Claytonia vices: I know thats the golden rule but it was a team building activity from office 🙂@Chriz: Hey whats fashion got to do with all this?

  16. Nishanth says:

    hey….the pain will last for a few days. but the memories will last a lifetime….so now whats ur call????anyways, i am proud of u that u went for the trek…..always remember…sometimes its the decisions that are taken during insanity u remember thru your destiny…luv…

  17. Deepti says:

    @Nishanth: yes bro .. it was worth it all but the aches and pains almost had me weeping 😀

  18. Sree says:

    Whats the story of the torn shirt?hehe made me smile at the end and couldnt leave without saying something.

  19. Deepti says:

    @Sree: The shirt got stuck in the thorns :). Thanks for dropping by 😀

  20. Shantanu says:

    That was funny! You write well… 🙂

  21. Deepti says:

    @Shantanu: Thanks a lot. Keep dropping by 🙂

  22. Nirmal says:

    ha ha tat was great/…may tat gal have lot of such trips……i hope tat gals not u…..lols

  23. ceedy says:

    What a dud but in a good way – before reading the italics there was all sorts of sorry feelings 😉

  24. Deepti says:

    @Nirmal: that gal is me 😀 … yeah I am off for one more trip but hope this one’s a lot better 😀@Ceedy : yeah I tried a shock value kinda post thats all 🙂

  25. Flyaway Mind says:

    hehee..try moon-light trekking..i recently came back half-baked after a trek to skandagiri..

  26. Mansi Trivedi says:

    I agree!how could she….

  27. jj says:

    hehe….nice post!trekking travails ha?hope you’re fine now!

  28. Deepti says:

    @Flyaway mind: Just on saturday I went on a night trail to a jungle ..was awesome 😀@Mansi: Yeah how could she.. but she went again with lots of sunscreen and so it only half baked now 😀@jj: A lot better now.. but I had gone again this weekend but it was for Rafting 😀

  29. chinny says:

    what a let down!

  30. Deepti says:

    @Chinny: Sorry to disappoint you… I was just trying to add a surprise element

  31. Satish Bolla says:

    am confused to the core… 😦 gr8 suspence

  32. Deepti says:

    @Satish : Hehehe why were you confused? the suspense unravels in the end right?

  33. Enduring the Babbles of Life says:

    hehehe…reminds me of getting lost in the snow and rain in a mountain in Switzerland…boy was i crying aloud…really f****** with work…didn’t have any time to read ur posts

  34. Deepti says:

    @Durba:Hey thanks durbi for dropping by … 🙂

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